New ALT-POP song (unreleased)

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#1

Hey guys, I’m about to release my third single. It’s unreleased so I hope people will respect it and don’t share it everywhere :slight_smile: The song will be released Friday, October the 1st

What I want to know is; do you generally like it? And what do you think bout the lyrics and especially the mix. I’m thinking of removing the formant-shifted vocal in the very last chorus, what do you guys think?

Changes I personally want to make is.

  1. Cut the bridge in half, and make the break a bit shorter (from the bridge to the last chorus).
  2. maybe change the very last chorus

P.S second verse is just duplicated and the lead vocal is still a demo vocal (need to pronounce words more clearly etc.).

I have to send it to mix/master in about 1 week, so I have to finish it soon.

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#2

Yeah try shortening the the bridge/break and see how it flows. Other than that only one thing that I didn´t like and it´s the “bouncing” kick that to me felt too robotic/programmed. I´m sure it´s correct but it didn´t flow 100% to me. Mix sounds great to me. I listened on frequency corrected headphones.

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#3

Ty for the feedback mange, I really appreciate it :slight_smile: I will look into the drums, and I’m very glad you liked my pre-mix.

#4

I really enjoyed the track from top to bottom! Looking forward to hearing what changes you ended up making although I think it is pretty perfect as is. Harmonies are just :fire:

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#5

Hey Vedinarose

Thank you so much, here is the final version :slight_smile: